Delving Deeper

This week we continued to learn about the features of persuasive writing.  We created a video to help us recall what they are, and to refer back to when we get stuck or want to identify our next learning step.

Unfortunately a couple of our group members were absent on Friday, so we will try and record their learning this week and get the video up as soon as we have done this.

This week we also moved our OREO writing activity about COOLs onto Word Online.  In doing this we were able to continue to add to our ideas, and highlight the features of persuasive language we were using.  This is a really powerful tool that helps us to see our learning in action.

Here are some screenshots of our work:

Remember, these are a work in progress and are still working documents.  

You can click on them to make them larger.

Did you spot the great example of Repetition in one of these pieces of writing?